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You took your knife out as you walked down merry go round at the old abandon amusement park with jack. He was gobbling down candy as you walked. As he looked into his bag he saw that he had ate all o his candy but didn't want to leave you just so he could get more. He plopped him self down at and old horse while you sat at the other one right next to it. 

He looked at you swooning. You giggled and that really got his attention. "Do it again." He said but you had no idea what he was talking about. "Do what again?" You asked smiling. "Giggle, laugh, I love the sound." He said. You giggled at his remark. Then he started ticking you as you fell to the ground. God you hated being ticked. You were laughing till it hurt to badly. "Jack haha it haha hurts ." You said barley above a whisper. He stopped and picked you up bridal style. And carried you off to his 'room'. 

He laid you on the big black bed.  He laid on top of you and started pecking at your lips. He finally stopped pecking and pulled you into a huge kiss. His tounge licked your lips asking for permission. You gladly opened. Life was good. 

/3 months later/
You couldn't take it anymore. You parents expected you to be the perfect child and you weren't. A's B's and 1 C. They were so pissed. You had had enough. You ran into the woods. You knew all the creepy pastas fuck you were one. But now it was time to end all your pain. You tied one end of a rope to a tree branch and then made a loop for your head. You tithed the rope around your neck. You let go of the tree branch as you heard fast foot steps. It was laughing Jack. He ripped the tree branch down. You had only passed out. He put his head to your chest. You heart was still beating thank god. He was crying and chuckling at the same time with joy. 

"Y/n now you can live with me." Jack whispered takin you back to the amusement park
Title says it all!
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mewow23 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Sorry about this but I am really superstitious:
 Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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kyshari1999 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
a question was forgotten where she asks am i pretty and he says no
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chals099 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
oh by the way I love your picture XD
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chals099 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry about this but I am also really superstitious:
 Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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kyshari1999 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
it forgot a question where she asks am i pretty and he says no
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laughingjewel Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
MAKE ANOTHER
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
I agree with you
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
! YOU DONT GOT TO HANG YOURSELF!!! FOR PETE SAKES JUST RUN AWAY WITH L.J. BAM!!!
Glacier: ..... *facepalm* ITS FOR THE STORY!!!!! >:l
Me: ... HEY YOU KNOW I hAVE A BRAIN OF A 6 1/2 YEAR OLD!! well in human years anyway~
Glacier: *sighs*
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:( the last part is sweet and sad. I almost cried. god damn. 
could you possibly make a sequel? it is so good!
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Meowlicity Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My parents are exactly like that.......Good story :D
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AllLanguagesInOne Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Who would ever want to kill themself? Probably someone who hates themself, but I absilutilly LOVE me!!!!!
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:iconflareonwolf:
Flareonwolf Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Artist
Well that escalated quickly .2.
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PikaHolly Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Drooling Smiley Emoticon/Avatar Extreme OMG OMG - Watch that :nuu: ...Seal Icon Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Nosebleeds fondo blanco 
I almost kill myself...and I got a hot SMEXY MAN WHILE IN THE PROCESS...?

...SEEMS LEGIT!!!

*Can no longer comprehend sentence structure and can only DERRRRRRPPPPP
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
That's a good pic and I can't believe that I almost died too!
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It was too crazeh up in there... I was like all 'Nah, man, nah...'
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
True thatEne (Smile) [V7]  (trying this out for the first time)
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's complicated.
But yeah, those are fun. :D
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
Your right it is fun. How was you day today?
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Exhausting. Yours?
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
Exhausting as well and my gym teacher just did something horrible to me. And that is called my mom and grandma to tell them if your child dosent wear shorts she will fail PE. What a jerk
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dood ikr
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Derp derp yep derp....:-) 
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:iconcinnamonsockmonkey:
CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lel wut
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Derp!
(Lol, :-))
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:iconcinnamonsockmonkey:
CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
again. lel whut
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh...I seem to be able so speak normal again now...:-) 
I agreed with your first comment this entire time...
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol okay thanks for clearing that up
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MusicXsmiles17 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daaawww so sweet... Well is it expected since he has a lot of candy??? * cough * which he uses to sometimes kill people :shiftyeyes: :shiftyeyes: :shiftyeyes:  Ive said nothing 0.0
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AlexandrieaTheKiller Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
I think its beautiful. Very nice job
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Ayeni-chan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Photographer

E-Even if it's short...

It's so damn great!! °-°

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Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
.........well,atleast someone loves me more than something else.(unlike most people in my life SOMEONE cares about me.they probably don't understand me.)
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QueenofGames14 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand that feel! I shall love you! :D
*hugs* :3
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Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
>w< I feel better meow
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QueenofGames14 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*hugs you tightly and starts crying tears of joy* SO KAWII!!! *little neko ears appear on head*
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Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
M-meowwwwwwww




UR CRUSHING ME NYA
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QueenofGames14 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sets you down gently* I'm sorry.
*hand falls off* oh. *puts it back on* I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Zomb the Zombie! Don't worry, I like you, I won't eat your brains! :3
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Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
He... Uh thanks.....and as you know I'm Silverpelt.:3 P.S. I don't like zombie hunting so you're alright!
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QueenofGames14 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well Silverpelt. You
Are
FABULOUS!!!!
*pink feather thing is put around your neck and big sunglasses are place on your head. Glitter is flying in the sky*
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Sexy-Slender-Dragon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why do I like reading these?
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Because they're addicting .-.
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:iconsexy-slender-dragon:
Sexy-Slender-Dragon Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I have an addiction!!
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
I do too!
1.) These stories
2.) Caffine
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:iconsexy-slender-dragon:
Sexy-Slender-Dragon Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
1-Yoai ( yaoi?)
2-Fan Fictions
3-Chocolate milk
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
1. same
2. same
3. EVERYTHING CHOCOLATE 
4. pokemon 
5. supernatural
6. doctor who
7. art (ba dum tshhh)
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
YUSH!
<333
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Sexy-Slender-Dragon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Lolz c:
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flyingbakabunny Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
he loves me more than candy?! :,D yis
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Deatharay Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SCREAMS
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purpledragoness13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
If puppets freak you out you should read candlelight cove😱the creepyist pasta of them all.(Skin taker is in nightmares🙀💀🙍
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