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You took your knife out as you walked down merry go round at the old abandon amusement park with jack. He was gobbling down candy as you walked. As he looked into his bag he saw that he had ate all o his candy but didn't want to leave you just so he could get more. He plopped him self down at and old horse while you sat at the other one right next to it. 

He looked at you swooning. You giggled and that really got his attention. "Do it again." He said but you had no idea what he was talking about. "Do what again?" You asked smiling. "Giggle, laugh, I love the sound." He said. You giggled at his remark. Then he started ticking you as you fell to the ground. God you hated being ticked. You were laughing till it hurt to badly. "Jack haha it haha hurts ." You said barley above a whisper. He stopped and picked you up bridal style. And carried you off to his 'room'. 

He laid you on the big black bed.  He laid on top of you and started pecking at your lips. He finally stopped pecking and pulled you into a huge kiss. His tounge licked your lips asking for permission. You gladly opened. Life was good. 

/3 months later/
You couldn't take it anymore. You parents expected you to be the perfect child and you weren't. A's B's and 1 C. They were so pissed. You had had enough. You ran into the woods. You knew all the creepy pastas fuck you were one. But now it was time to end all your pain. You tied one end of a rope to a tree branch and then made a loop for your head. You tithed the rope around your neck. You let go of the tree branch as you heard fast foot steps. It was laughing Jack. He ripped the tree branch down. You had only passed out. He put his head to your chest. You heart was still beating thank god. He was crying and chuckling at the same time with joy. 

"Y/n now you can live with me." Jack whispered takin you back to the amusement park
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:iconlaughingjewel:
laughingjewel Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  New member Student
MAKE ANOTHER
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  New member
! YOU DONT GOT TO HANG YOURSELF!!! FOR PETE SAKES JUST RUN AWAY WITH L.J. BAM!!!
Glacier: ..... *facepalm* ITS FOR THE STORY!!!!! >:l
Me: ... HEY YOU KNOW I hAVE A BRAIN OF A 6 1/2 YEAR OLD!! well in human years anyway~
Glacier: *sighs*
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
:( the last part is sweet and sad. I almost cried. god damn. 
could you possibly make a sequel? it is so good!
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CanIhascookie56 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My parents are exactly like that.......Good story :D
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AllLanguagesInOne Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Artist
Who would ever want to kill themself? Probably someone who hates themself, but I absilutilly LOVE me!!!!!
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Flareonwolf Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Artist
Well that escalated quickly .2.
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PikaHolly Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Drooling Smiley Emoticon/Avatar Extreme OMG OMG - Watch that :nuu: ...Seal Icon Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed Nosebleeds fondo blanco 
I almost kill myself...and I got a hot SMEXY MAN WHILE IN THE PROCESS...?

...SEEMS LEGIT!!!

*Can no longer comprehend sentence structure and can only DERRRRRRPPPPP
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CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
dood ikr
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:iconpikaholly:
PikaHolly Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Derp derp yep derp....:-) 
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:iconcinnamonsockmonkey:
CinnamonSockmonkey Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
lel wut
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